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i am the
moon: i am
the silver pill
descending
down
your throat
to weigh down
lashes
into leaden eyes--
i am the
moon: lover
of the dark.

the stars are
all dead in their
twinkling dance--
you'll be safe, dear,
as i am the moon,
with all of their
secrets.

you're alright.

(i am good bye and yet,
you think only of romantic
rues)

i am the moon.
i am the crescent
pearl,
looking dead--
and dead altogether,
i still die.
there is a dead girl every night, and these are some of her words that i remember.


--
GET MY GLASSES I GOT A DD  WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT! 
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Given 2014-07-23
[transmissions of a dead girl] by crimsonletters conveys a stark hollowness and deep sadness within images that are normally romanticized. ( Suggested by BlackBowfin and Featured by GrimFace242 )
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Vanessalovesart Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
this is beyond beautiful
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:iconcrimsonletters:
Thankyou:blush:
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vespera Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
an anthology you may be interested in submitting this to:

twoofcupspress.wordpress.com/c…

I heard through the grapevine that their editor, Leigh Anne Hornfeldt, is still looking for more work :)

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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
thanks for the info, i might submit it if i find the sanity to do so.
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:iconvespera:
vespera Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
good luck! :)
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014   Writer
This is so lovely!
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
awthanks!
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcongratsdd1plz::iconcongratsdd2plz::iconcongratsdd3plz:
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
yay thanks :la:
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artbyfieldsofsage Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice.  Congrats on the DD!
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
thanks!
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artbyfieldsofsage Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are so welcome:)
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UntamedUnwanted Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
hey thanks c:
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
I’m very happy for you!!! :iconloveloveplz: :tighthug:
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Thank you very much! Blushing with Heart 
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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Tangled-Tales Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so fantastic and haunting. It touched my heart, and I was engaged with every word. Stay wonderful! :hug:
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
I'm glad! Mm Happy 
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Icyevie Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
I love the impact made by lines 4, 5 & 6 in stanza one. Wonderfully written. ^^
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
I have to look at it again to know what lines you were saying, haha. Thank you so much!
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soundofsilver Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is PERFECTION. :)
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
awh, thanks.
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:iconanikaxox:
anikaxox Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is wonderfully written! I love it c:  
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
:aww 
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:iconkitalia-emme:
kitalia-emme Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Professional Writer
Haunting. I love it!
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Thanks! 
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haileysthelimit Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Nicely worded, I like
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
:paww: 
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StarfallenWolf Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifully written. Amazing. :heart:!!!
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Aww revamp 
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artsyspirit Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Incredible.
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
:thanks:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014   Writer
This is truly eerily beautiful - congrats to the very deserved DD :clap: :heart:
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Thankyou:aww:
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BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Congrats on the DD!
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Oh man. Thank you so much for suggesting it! I think I've fainted. 
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:iconblackbowfin:
BlackBowfin Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome.  Thank you for writing the poem.  I'm glad more people got to enjoy it.  Hope the DD brought a bright spot of awesome to your day/night.  You really deserved it.  :)
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
That was very kind of you. It did! Thanks so much. :aww 
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slendycreeper Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sad, but still a beautiful piece of writing.
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Thank you. :aww:
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slendycreeper Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a pleasure~
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InspirontehLucario Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is great!You got a very well-deserved Daily Deviation :D
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
thanks! :la:
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InspirontehLucario Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Writer
YES.
This deserved DD status so SO much. 
Well done! :happybounce:
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Ohgod. I didn't expect it.
Thank you so much. :la:
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AyeAye12 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Student Writer
xP
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A-Shadow-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcongratsddplz:
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crimsonletters Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Thankyou.
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